Incredible INDIA....
People here suffer n die ,
that's coz the rate of BPL's are high,
Poverty is what the major reason,
which is killing nation as a poison .
There are people wit many houses on 1 side,
and e1 those wit no house on other side,
some who don't knw the value of money,
and some work hard e1 to earn a penny.
Politicians promise to provide basic for poor during election,
but they seems to fill their own account after selection,
''rich become richer, and poor become poorer'' is country's principle,
but e1 then INDIA is incredible.
This is my small attempt to put ma thoughts about INDIA when it comes
to poverty... INDIA is no doubt an INCREDIBLE country but guys don't
we need change when it comes to its demerits such as poverty ,
diseases and many more!!!! Think!!!
Penned by:- K.Giridhar Pai
People here suffer n die ,
that's coz the rate of BPL's are high,
Poverty is what the major reason,
which is killing nation as a poison .
There are people wit many houses on 1 side,
and e1 those wit no house on other side,
some who don't knw the value of money,
and some work hard e1 to earn a penny.
Politicians promise to provide basic for poor during election,
but they seems to fill their own account after selection,
''rich become richer, and poor become poorer'' is country's principle,
but e1 then INDIA is incredible.
This is my small attempt to put ma thoughts about INDIA when it comes
to poverty... INDIA is no doubt an INCREDIBLE country but guys don't
we need change when it comes to its demerits such as poverty ,
diseases and many more!!!! Think!!!
Penned by:- K.Giridhar Pai
Dear Giri,
ReplyDeleteIts another very sensible poem.
Keep writing...
In the second half though the lines seem to be longer, they have not lost the poetic sense.
Still, if it were shorter lines it would have been better..